I write songs -please give criticisms or encouragement
Here is my best song:
LOVE EXPLAINED
Jesus was God
He was king
He created all
Then concieved in a virgin's womb
His holy spirit was born in a stable room
When alive He lived in human flesh
When His immortal blood was shed for your soul
The veil was torn and God's presense was opened to mortal man
Christ's life conquered death and the grave
So that every person will be saved
Christ arose from the grave on the third day
His grace and faith make hope available
Christ gives His words to every person who will put their faith in Him
He will free from death and sin
Eternal life is about knowing God
Eternal life is only through Jesus Christ
FAITH EXPLAINED
If God said He is That I AM then that's supposed to make me think I am
You are all things you see you know
You live in a world that's sinking low
There is one supporting theme to this song
That's to be strong
That's to be strong
You are all things you see inside
Please grace don't decide to go and hide
We've had enough vengeance in this life
And too much strife
Now you're gonna be god
You're gonna be all of everything that you're in 'cause you're in it
You're gonna know all the names
Gonna trust all the faces
You're gonna be everything you'd have respect to see
Everything is a part of all of the everything that is everything
And it all has something
All means something
I'm sick of meaning everything to me
Yes it all has worth
Yes it's of this earth
Yes it all had birth here
It's all of the everything that is everyone
That is everyone, that is all of the everyone
If Christ said that he is God that's supposed to make me think He is
So I've got a new relationship
Behaviorship is not as hip as a harmony of ecstacy
It's all for me
So I eat it up
So I drink it down
So I ball it up, crawling up
I'm giving up my horoscope
To make sure it doesn't get me down where I drown
So I crawl to the wall where there's nothing left at all
And then I fall
But it really doesn't matter
Just one more step on the ladder
All along sing the song
Is it right or is it wrong
It's just a song, just a song, just a song, just a song, just a song, just a song, just a song
In spite of all this urgency I feel
In spite of all these thoughts I'm told are'nt real
In spite of the allegiance of the throng
In spite of something knowing all along
That there's nothing wrong- too real to know
That there's no way that I cannot grow
Here I go
Agree to go along
In spite of never knowing what went wrong
Right or wrong
Whether it's good or bad
It's the very very best that I have
It's the very very best that I have
If Christ said that I am god then that's supposed to make me think God is my personal friend
So I now break free from trial
I scream denial's a part of me
I'm sweaty and I'm heavy and I think I'm something else
It's hard to uncover yourself
You are all things you see you know
You live in a world that's sinking low
There is one supporting theme to this song
That's to be strong, that's to be strong
Thanks, Mary Burwell (I just turned 21 this past Easter day)